A great tip for writers of anything

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    Try it and see how it comes out.
     
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    Very good OP. I'll try it.
     
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    I'm very impressed!
     
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    Very helpful! Awesome!
     
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    I will be on this very soon.......I mean right away.
     
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    /----/ Three words to eliminate from your writing are SO, VERY and SUDDENLY
     
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    If you use "archaic" here, deanna will scold you. I'm tellin ya
     
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    Bigly.
     
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    Why not just drop "very" from the word's in the first column? .... :dunno:
     
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    Suddenly, I realize you're so very right
     

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