Iron Poet

[syrenn]

It would seem as if there are a few poets out there....

This is a little thread called Iron Poet... The poetry must be original and yours.

You play by using the three words given at the bottom of the post, provided by the poster before you, in a new poem that you write. A duel shall we say of words.

You may use a variation of a word. For example. Flip, flipping ,flipped.

Sorrow for the Lost
Broken Souls
Dreams in Time, Surrender
Space moves
It Comes.​

new words
flowing
blue
time

 

[Ropey]

glowing
silver
mime

Oh, do you mean to use your three words in a poem?

Nice if so.

I'll add D'oh...

 

[syrenn]

glowing
silver
mime

Oh, do you mean to use your three words in a poem?

Nice if so.

no YOU have to write a new poem with the words i gave you at the bottom

new words
flowing
blue
time

 

[Ropey]

The warm blue mien enfolds a dream,
flowing through a green-blue stream,
Still quiet enough to slow the time,
and so allows me a nice quiet dine...
​

Live
Love
Leave

 

[syrenn]

The warm blue mien enfolds a dream,
flowing through a green-blue stream,
Still quiet enough to slow the time,
and so allows me a nice quiet dine...

Dont forget to leave three new words for the next poem.

 

[syrenn]

Under the moon light
Shadows live
Leaving, but not
Loving the Sun


​

new words
grapes
road
soft

 

[Ropey]

Under the moon light
Shadows live
Leaving, but not
Loving the Sun​

He trod upon the grapes of wrath,
This foolish bird on the wrong path.
Now riding the soft shoulder of the road,
Shallow of mind; noneffective and cold.​

Eternity
Clock
Advice

 

[syrenn]

Can you hear time, gentle pressure
Fathomless motion
Silent the Clock
Listen to Eternity Cosmic Advice
Where the Universe
Breathes






​

new words
frost
sheen
pen

 

[Ropey]

^ Very nice.

When the sheen of frost limes the tenement wall,
then shrouds of sparkles gently pen their fall.
​

Sweet
Night
Different

 

[syrenn]

Different Dreams
Sweetness in the Gloaming
Trembling, Shimmering
Gentle comes the Night
​

new words
steel
borrow
froth

 

[Ropey]

Different Dreams
Sweetness in the Gloaming
Trembling, Shimmering
Gentle comes the Night


^Sweet fusion...​

new words
steel
borrow
froth

Words are bank, and I love to spend,
Like Tony Montana and his little friend.
Pulling blue steel paid on the borrow,
Pink-red will froth today or tomorrow.​

Tony = "It's a crazy business we're in."​

power
women
glide

 

[yidnar]

Different Dreams
Sweetness in the Gloaming
Trembling, Shimmering
Gentle comes the Night


^Sweet fusion...​

new words
steel
borrow
froth

Words are bank, and I love to spend,
Like Tony Montana and his little friend.
Pulling blue steel paid on the borrow,
Pink-red will froth today or tomorrow.​

power
women
glide

you are very talented Ropey !!!

 

[Ropey]

you are very talented Ropey !!!

^^I'm Cheesy. I know talent.

What I am doing is penning aromatic cheese. A decent variety possibly, but cheese nevertheless.

But thank you for enjoying my form of cheese.

I remember when John Lennon was asked what he thought about other people calling his music noise.

He said:

"It's all noise. People just like different noises."

RIP John...

 

[Ropey]

power
women
glide

Powerful women glide in their mention,
Lovely women glide in their flowering.
Bright women glide in their intention,
All women glide in their empowering​

done
deal
meal

 

[syrenn]

The meal is done, Savored
Sweet wine of fortune, Quaffed
Regret not the Deal
The hand of life​

new words
sky
hand
mist

 

[editec]

As if by a devine hand the sky fell upon us.
We took refuge in the mist.


trump(s)
halcyon
breast

 

[daveman]

My love's breasts were firm and high
In the halcyon days of our youth
Yet ever shall my hands seek their weight
Until Death's trump sounds final truth.

artistry
September
paper

 

[freedombecki]

small paper poppies on the shelf
in mem'ry of grandmother's self
her being honored others' good
ensuring that she knew they could
serve life to best advatage when
called to the nation's need again

her artistry included will
from patriotic dream to fill
january to december
forever, even september
she graced streets commoner than laws
hawking her poppies for a cause

a vet'ran in hospital room
whose life would otherwise call gloom
she brought a candle to their world
in which the proud flag was unfurled
because she certainly believed
our cause was good as lives retrieved

waiver
astronomer
thermal
​

 

[Ropey]

small paper poppies on the shelf
in mem'ry of grandmother's self
her being honored others' good
ensuring that she knew they could
serve life to best advatage when
called to the nation's need again

her artistry included will
from patriotic dream to fill
january to december
forever, even september
she graced streets commoner than laws
hawking her poppies for a cause

a vet'ran in hospital room
whose life would otherwise call gloom
she brought a candle to their world
in which the proud flag was unfurled
because she certainly believed
our cause was good as lives retrieved

waiver
astronomer
thermal
​

Possibilities birth an astronomical span of time
Reducing thermals from a lift of the kestrels wings
So plunges the wavering bird on this air of mime
And returns effervescently as new gusts align.

wooly
advice
membrane

 

[syrenn]

Hollow advice, distant sound
Filtered
Though a membrane
Of wooly embrace
​

sugar
blanket
snap