Well, to make a couple of comments out of many to come from others I can see what I think is one error, in my opinion, from one of the statements.
Most days, they would emerge from the dark mine, squinting at the light.
Most days, they would emerge, sweaty and dirty and dusted with coal.
Most days, they'd come home. But not that day.
I would think the miners would emerge from these tasks
Everyday, instead of using 'Most Days'.
I guess I am being too picky and am not the world's best orator/speechwriter myself so probably have no business criticizing some professional speechwriter, but it appeared not quite right to me.
Without going through the Psalm, "Valley of death" etc I think it should have been shorter and to the point without drifting, as I am doing right now.
He did show up at least. I think all of us feel a loss to varying degrees when any tragedy occurs to others, here or anywhere else.
Oh one more thing from his comments.........
How can we fail them? How can a nation that relies on its miners not do everything in its power to protect them? How can we let anyone in this country put their lives at risk by simply showing up to work; by simply pursuing the American dream?
How can we let anyone in this country put their lives at risk by simply showing up to work
Gee I suddenly think of the Military, Law enforcement, border patrol, Taxi Drivers and dozens of other jobs,where were his comments and concerns all along?
Well, it's NOT about just the miners that the government wants to
protect, they want to
protect ALL of US by passing laws that will constrict our abilities to perform 100% while we wade through waist high red tape.All in the name of Health- Safety- and For
'our' general welfare of course. Okay I am done for now, too much multitasking and my comments start to ramble and get disconnected.