What makes good haiku?

[Twisted Gypsy Child]

Heavy, silent choice,
A blob of tissue path now redefined,
Sigh, and then release.

Abortion

 

[hondo 50]

Just did my laundry
Laughing more and more and more
Cherry stain removed

 

[lith leo]

Heavy, silent choice,
A blob of tissue path now redefined,
Sigh, and then release.

Abortion

Lazy convenience
I have better things to do
Says baby killer

Abortion

 

[Twisted Gypsy Child]

Lazy convenience
I have better things to do
Says baby killer

Abortion

Cold steel hums softly,
Whispers of power and fear—
Silent breath held tight.

gun

 

[Twisted Gypsy Child]

Silent shadows fall,
In the depths, a heart whispers,
Hope flickers, then dims.

suicide

 

[Twisted Gypsy Child]

Joy dances in light,
Laughter fills the vibrant air,
Hearts unite in bliss.

celebration

 

[Twisted Gypsy Child]

Just did my laundry
Laughing more and more and more
Cherry stain removed

Nature calls with ease,​

A moment of pure release,​

Life's cycle, a breeze.​

I put a Hondo 50 in the porcelain bowl

Silent bowl awaits,​

Water swirls, secrets descend,​

Relief in the flush.​

and gave it a flush


celebration

 

[BULLDOG]

Sweet tea on porch swing.
Cool breeze, good bowel movement.
I don't ask for much.