No, it isn't. I'm asking you what in your opinion was "improper" about the 19th amendment?
Your argument so far seems to be that you don't like the original document because it doesn't list "expectations of the citizenry towards the government." Yet, at the same time you are using the original document as a justification to be against universal suffrage. It seems contradictory to me. Either you think the original Constitution disenfranchised woman and therefore this should be followed, or you believe the constitution erred, and you wanted a constitution that added certain conditions that woman don't meet in your opinion. Which is it?
I'm not trying to trap you, but I am trying to get your position into a solid argument