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CRITIQUE IT PAH-LEEZE.
BEAT BY SHADOWVILLE PROD.
LYRICS AND VOCALS BY G.T.
I've got nothing to criticize about your flow or content. Good stuff there. i think you know what you're doing.
About the beat, the wah guitar distracted. I like a beat the works on the subconscious while I'm focusing on the rap, and this one got in the way of that sometimes. It wasn't a terrible beat, i just think your flow deserves better.
That version of a loose hi-hat wasn't doing it for me. This is a drum pattern and sound I'm hearing in my head. Comes in at about 15sec.
[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N921CluWBHQ]YouTube - J Dilla Ft. Common "E=MC2" (Instrumental)[/ame]
You've got a tight flow, so a tighter hi-hat and harder snare would compliment that I think. The bass line is solid.
I wasn't digging the wah guitar that much, but the slide guitar in the first verse could work with some added echo and longer slides, so it sounds something similar to what's going on here.
[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dJo675-NTbQ]YouTube - Atmosphere - Painting[/ame]
Those are just some foggy ideas. Everyone's a critic, like they say. Great work, though.