GT - "In My Mind"

[Madeline]

You have a gorgeous voice, GT. Thankies for sharing!

 

[Big Black Dog]

Not my kind of music but it's apparent you have a hunk of talent. Good luck with it all.

 

[daveman]

Not bad at all. I really like the music. Good voice, too.

 

[Paulie]

Good beat choice. I always liked Shadowville's beats, have they gotten anywhere beyond soundclick yet?

You need to get yourself a female singer and put her on tracks like these. That would have been pretty dope to compliment the track. Maybe just like a little background piece to compliment the chorus. Does your wife sing?

Good bars, good flow. I like the way the chorus was mixed with the beat, it fit like a glove. I try not to critique anything on the mixing angle because no matter how good you might think you're doing on a rudimentary level, it's nothing like a pro's work. I'm just a rudimentary mixer myself, especially when post-producing with vocals. It's one thing to mix an instrumental, but vocals are super complex sometimes depending on the beat.

It's tough though, because the mix can make or break the whole track. It's tough to be neutral on it and still critique the track properly.

Anyway though, I digress. As usual, your lyrics were tight and you're putting the bars together nicely. In the beginning there you started off hitting some quarter notes with the flow. Or maybe they were eighth notes, I gotta go back and listen. Always the sign of a good rapper. Nice bridge there, too.