2aguy
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This is my rewrite of the Return of the Jedi end....
First, I never liked the idea that Darth Vader was Lukes dad....I thought that was dumb.....he should have simply been the guy who murdered Luke's dad.....
Sooooo..
As they try to destroy the force field protecting the new Death Star, Luke allows himself to be captured in order to distract Vader from stopping the other rebels....since the Emperor really wanted to meet Luke and try to turn him the way he brought in Vader....
Vader Brings Luke in front of the Emperor where the Emporer tries to recruit Luke.....he, of course says no, so the Emperor begins killing Luke with the force lightening, enjoying torturing him first, slowly, as in the original.....
As the Emperor is doing this Vader stabs the Emperor in the back with his light saber........
At this point, Vader offers Luke to take his old job and be his right hand man .....Luke....again, refuses, and force pulls his lightsaber and begins to fight Vader....
Luke, having been beaten before by Vader, is losing again......as per the original scene.......then, Vader taunts Luke, and realizes he has a sister, and Vader tells Luke he will go after his sister to corrupt her and bring her to the Dark side........and Luke again becomes focused and enraged and then kills vader.......
Now..... I also have a problem with Leia being Luke's Sister...that too was dumb......but going with it...
And scene......
The whole idea that Vader could be redeemed simply because he saved his son from the Emperor was also a really stupid idea........
When Mof Tarkin genocided an entire planet....Vader did not complain, he did not advocate to not do it, and chided Tarkin, after they found out Leia lied, that Leia would never give up the rebellion that easily....he said it as a joke to Tarkin......no remorse, regret, second thoughts...
You do not get to murder an entire planet full of innocent people and get a "redemption" arc..........
First, I never liked the idea that Darth Vader was Lukes dad....I thought that was dumb.....he should have simply been the guy who murdered Luke's dad.....
Sooooo..
As they try to destroy the force field protecting the new Death Star, Luke allows himself to be captured in order to distract Vader from stopping the other rebels....since the Emperor really wanted to meet Luke and try to turn him the way he brought in Vader....
Vader Brings Luke in front of the Emperor where the Emporer tries to recruit Luke.....he, of course says no, so the Emperor begins killing Luke with the force lightening, enjoying torturing him first, slowly, as in the original.....
As the Emperor is doing this Vader stabs the Emperor in the back with his light saber........
At this point, Vader offers Luke to take his old job and be his right hand man .....Luke....again, refuses, and force pulls his lightsaber and begins to fight Vader....
Luke, having been beaten before by Vader, is losing again......as per the original scene.......then, Vader taunts Luke, and realizes he has a sister, and Vader tells Luke he will go after his sister to corrupt her and bring her to the Dark side........and Luke again becomes focused and enraged and then kills vader.......
Now..... I also have a problem with Leia being Luke's Sister...that too was dumb......but going with it...
And scene......
The whole idea that Vader could be redeemed simply because he saved his son from the Emperor was also a really stupid idea........
When Mof Tarkin genocided an entire planet....Vader did not complain, he did not advocate to not do it, and chided Tarkin, after they found out Leia lied, that Leia would never give up the rebellion that easily....he said it as a joke to Tarkin......no remorse, regret, second thoughts...
You do not get to murder an entire planet full of innocent people and get a "redemption" arc..........
