You did not capitalize, "you."
You need a comma in the first sentence.
The first sentence is poor grammar.
An ellipsis is three periods, not five.
You misused the ellipsis three times.
An ellipsis is used as a word would be used, with a space. Al ellipsis does not connect sentences.
A person of low intelligence does not recognize that spelling errors happen when using a cell phone keyboard.
My one fat thumb error to your seven low intelligence grammar mistakes after you put the, "grammar police" hat on shows you are of very low intelligence.