G.T.: "Bad Burn" rough draft

[Paulie]

HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!

I think this is my favorite yet from you. This is the best you're vocal has fit over a beat you chose, too. Hot beat, hot flow with nothing to criticize at all, and great lyrics.

If I could possibly make any negative critique at all, so to speak, it would be maybe on the chorus you should put a little more inflection and range in your voice, for more feeling, just to kind of change up the mood between the verses. If I was there with you in person I could give you a specific example, it's kind of hard on here.

But definitely your best work so far. It ******* BETTER be for how long since your last track

 

[Paulie]

That 2nd verse came out the cuts.....I was high on coffee when I jotted it down a little while ago.

And I think the 2nd verse shit all over the first, too.

 

[Paulie]

Is that a Bledsoe Jersey?

I don't think so. Bledsoe was 11. I can't make out what the first number is, but it's defintiely not a 1.

 

[Paulie]

oh that aint you?

Nah dude, I'm cooler