Emptiness

[jimnyc]

Emptiness surrounds me
It surrounds my room, it surrounds my heart
How much can it take before it breaks apart

Is it there, do I want too much

What if everything is right here
Yet I'm out looking
Where do I go from here

It's always a new day
But it remains the same
Always stuck in the same game

When do you leave, when do you stay
When to take a chance and when to pray

I want out of the game, no longer want to play

Is the best yet to come
Or has it slipped on past me
Whats the odds of me, becoming we

Is it my fault or is it fate
How much longer need I wait

Will she be waiting for me at the gate?

 

[janeeng]

Jesus Jim - it's a gloomy damn night as it is, that just added to it!!! Hope this isn't what your feeling? maybe you need a night out! Jackass, where are you????

Excellent writing though!!!!!!!

 

[freeandfun1]

Don't worry, you'll find the right one and sooner than you think.

 

[Joz]

VERY good.
Hope those are just words.

 

[Shattered]

**wipes tear**

 

[rtwngAvngr]

Are you two comparing notes?

http://www.usmessageboard.com/forums/showthread.php?t=14130

 

[clumzgirl]

Cheer up. The Steelers won...again.

 

[Bonnie]

Jim, I hope that was cathartic for you, and you feel lighter now.

And if that was the pain medication talking, can I have some??

 

[janeeng]

Jim, I hope that was cathartic for you, and you feel lighter now.

And if that was the pain medication talking, can I have some??

Hell Bonnie, he had the good stuff too, Viacoden!!!!!!!!!!

 

[Adam's Apple]

Jim, maybe you could begin a career as a country/western songwriter. That almost sounds like a Hank Williams song.

 

[nakedemperor]

Jim, are you reliving your teen angst? Have a blow pop, they always help me =)