Am I a talented writer ??

[Quasar44]

I've seen elementary school students write better poems than this crap.

ok its sucks
What about a good laugh

 

[BlackSand]

i'm a better writer than all of you combined, brothers. i had straight A's in creative writing class

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You get a failing grade this time for lack of creativity and an overwhelming predictability ...
Leaves little for the reader to anticipate and enjoy.

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[shockedcanadian]

I have been bad for years and I hate white leftist the most

I have been bad for years and I hate white leftist the most

You are in pain with your back. Focus on healing your physical pains first. Please. I think you are just going through a bad patch, you weren't always this way.

 

[basquebromance]

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You get a failing grade this time for lack of creativity and an overwhelming predictability ...
Leaves little for the reader to anticipate and enjoy.

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i can't believe i haven't said this to you before: nobody cares what you think

 

[ChristisKing]

What about a good laugh

I guess if you're talking about how bad it was lol in all seriousness I sure hope that you're alright mentally wise.

 

[BlackSand]

i can't believe i haven't said this to you before: nobody cares what you think

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Thanks for caring enough to tell me ... You ignorant **** ...

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[basquebromance]

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Thanks for caring enough to tell me ... You ignorant **** ...

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the truth hurts

 

[BlackSand]

the truth hurts

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You'll get over it ... Stop your crying ...

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[BlackSand]

ok its sucks
What about a good laugh

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Tough crowd ... Good luck in your endeavors.
Look at the bright side ... There's a good chance your poetry could get better.

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[Quasar44]

You are in pain with your back. Focus on healing your physical pains first. Please. I think you are just going through a bad patch, you weren't always this way.

I aint evil !! I never committed a bad crime in my life
there is far worse than me

 

[Quasar44]

I guess if you're talking about how bad it was lol in all seriousness I sure hope that you're alright mentally wise.

Things will only get worse

 

[ChristisKing]

Things will only get worse

The thing is,.. I don't know if you're serious or only seeking attention.

 

[Quasar44]

The thing is,.. I don't know if you're serious or only seeking attention.

I am 1000 percent serious
You are truly seeing the destruction of a man before your eyes

 

[Quasar44]

I dont want to post what is instore for me come May when I leave LV to AZ

I aint even the WORSE here