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Copyright@Robert A. McIntyre June 6th 2010
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Working Titles for INCREDIBLES - 2
"Syndrome's Revenge" OR "Return of the SUPERS"
1. It is 6-8 years later so that Jack-Jack is (prepubescent) about the same age as "IncrediBoy" was when he tried
to help Mr.Incredible against "Bomb Voyage". Dash is about 16-17 and has grown into a fine young man and has come
a long way in mastering his abilities, although he has still not found the ultimate limit to his speed!
2. Violet has also come a long way with her abilities and can shield an entire baseball park from the
rain which her boyfriend happens to play at the college where she is a senior. Her and Dash still get into their
spats although no brother and sister are closer than they are. Dash is still a bit of a "rebel" especially when
he is driving. He has a "lead foot" because he knows he can run faster than any car and is still impatient.
3. Mr. Incredible runs a "Fitness Center" that the government gave him in appreciation for defeating Syndrome and
the "Underminers". Elastigirl is bored out of her mind. The "Supers" still have to remain in hiding as the
government...nuff said! There has been very little crime for several years since Frozone and the Incredibles
started working incognito.
4. Through the years the "Incredibles" have saved the day on more than one occasion but mostly on the down-low
without Jack-Jack. Jack-Jack's abilities have remained completely random and seemingly beyond his control. If he
tries to fly, he sinks into the earth or power beams shoot out of his eyes/hands and blast a hole in the wall.
Mom & Dad have him under strict orders NOT to attempt to use his powers unless supervised by Mom or Dad or other
adult SUPERS. They decide to send him for special training at a secret summer camp just for SUPERS Kids.
The kids are now out of the house most of the time and with nothing to do Helen has her own midlife crisis.
She decides to become a charter jet pilot so her and Bob end up swapping roles.
5. Unknown to Mr. Incredible and Elastigirl, Mirage is a nurse/counselor at SUPERS summer camp because
she wants to be as near as possible to the family she has grown to love. She discovers Jack-Jack's dilemma and
becomes determined to help the child as penance for the past. During private talks with Jack-Jack she becomes
convinced that all of his troubles began when he was traumatized by her former lover Syndrome. Dad makes a
lousy mom and things deteriorate. Jack-Jack feels abandoned by Mom and becomes withdrawn and he starts
to hate his nickname. Dash gets a speeding ticket, Jack-Jack won't call home, Violet is in Love(rigs a game) and
Dad becomes overwhelmed. He wants to support Helen's career so he doesn't tell her anything about all the
problems that have happened.
5a. Violet doesn't know it but her boyfriend is a SUPER. His power is that he is a SUPER detector/copycat.
He can detect SUPERS even at a distance and immediately knows what power(s)they have. If he gets close enough
to a SUPER, he can even mimic their power(s) until they are out of his range. When He and Violet kissed for
the first time, they actually both became invisible but didn't notice as their eyes were closed. Her boyfriend's
nickname is Ditto/ReRun because he has habit of repeating what other people say. or because in baseball if the
batter before him gets a home run, he gets a home run. It's actually an unintended result of his power.
6. Mirage decides that the only way to save Jack-Jack is to use regression therapy to help him relive the trauma
and hopefully effect a cure. As she uses hypnosis to help him think back she unexpectedly triggers a random
activation of Jack-Jack's powers. He "time-jumps" back to the exact instant of the trauma as the "baby Jack-Jack"
is falling through the air mere moments before Syndrome is sucked into the jet engine and the explosion!
7. The disoriented elder Jack-Jack floats closer to Syndrome and inadvertantly(deliberately?) allows Syndrome to
grab a hold on him and they both "time-jump" back to the future just as the plane explodes and gives Jack-Jack
an amnesia-causing concussion! Syndrome subdues both Jack-Jack and Mirage with ease and quickly whisks them
away to a secret safe-house.
8. With Jack-Jack and Mirage unconscious, Syndrome accesses his safe-house computers to get up to speed on
the history since his 'death' especially anything regarding the "Incredibles" and their alter egos. Now
armed with all the knowledge he needs he begins to plot his revenge and deliver on the promise he made to
Mr. Incredible.
9. When Jack-Jack awakens, Syndrome quickly realizes that Jack-Jack remembers nothing. He tells Jack-Jack that
he is the Super-Hero, Syndrome. He remembers Jack-Jack's crazy, unknown, unpredictable powers and tells Jack-Jack
that he is his sidekick "Wildcard". He also tells WildCard that their first order of business is to help
WildCard learn to control his powers. Mirage awakens and only sees WildCard whom she calls Jack-Jack. He looks
at her strangely and says his name is WildCard whereupon she sees Syndrome behind him, screams and faints
unconscious again.
10. Syndrome now keeps Mirage and WildCard separate as he does not want her to confuse the boy or help him
recover his memory. Days of training goes by as Syndrome brings the full force of his technological
intellect to solve the WildCard dilemma. Unexpectedly, the two bond and as they finally achieve success they
hug each other and Syndrome even gets teary-eyed. With the aid of Syndrome's technology, a continuous body
scanner similar to an MRI monitors WildCard for physical, electro-magnetic, radioactive, gravitational, etc...
changes and pre-determines with an amazing degree of accuracy what power(s) he possesses at any moment.
11. This knowledge while helpful is not enough and Syndrome rigorously trains WildCard to develop a rapid
improvisational skill whereby he is able to make use of the power to his best advantage. It doesn't always
work. During one test, he is given the ability to read and write human minds like a computer hard drive.
He starts to read Mirage's mind and discovers that she both hates and loves Syndrome. This confuses the
child and upsets him so he decides to erase all the hate so that all she does is love both Syndrome and
WildCard. Syndrome and Mirage rekindle their romance and WildCard is happy and he experiences baby Jack-Jack
flashbacks of happiness and other people that confuse/disturb him.
12. With WildCard at his side, Syndrome begins to implement his plans for the Incredibles and the World. He
builds a new criminal empire that he unleashes on the World. Crime statistics explode and Frozone and the
Incredibles cannot cope with the number of incidents especially behind the scenes. Finally the people and
governments of the World can take no more. At first they demand and then they beg that the SUPERS return to
society to save the World from the Crime Wave.
13. Elastigirl returns home to stay and discovers the disaster that has become of her home. She also discovers
that Jack-Jack is missing and almost falls to pieces. The only thing that saves her is Dash, Violet, and
Mr.Incredible all come together in group hug. Mr. Incredible says "We'll find Jack-Jack ??????
From the doorway Ditto/ReRun says, "We'll find Jack-Jack ??????? Violet and Ditto/ReRun explain what Ditto's
powers are.
13. Edna Mode is back in the Super-Hero outfit business!
Copyright@Robert A. McIntyre June 6th 2010