Haiku Moments

[Delia]

I love hummingbirds
Such poetry in motion
I love their colors

 

[Nika2013]

I am not sure...if you are a bar- room bard or an exquisite philosopher...I like it..

 

[Nika2013]

I wrote a message in response but it ended up at the end...oh well

 

[Nika2013]

crescent billows
changing pattern
sea breeze blowing
knowing
no master
calming, placid, passive spectrum
til stirring you rise
in anger or indifference
you are to me
the sea

 

[Capstone]

Writing the haiku
calls for lines and syllables
to be done just so...​

 

[freedombecki]

songbird abundance
even though morning rains fall
breakfast on front porch​

 

[Nika2013]

Capstone...
Yes...but the forum says Haiku..or any other form of writing....Just because it is Haiku does not make it good...

Words..like new flowers
Trapped within line structure
Die...unpleasant deaths.

 

[freedombecki]

happiness color
myriad shades of light red
good life in the pink
​

 

[freedombecki]

gray bird disappears
into the shadows of sun
sly obfuscation
​

 

[percysunshine]

Maple syrup birds
Woodpeckers delight on bark
We all enjoy sap.​

 

[Capstone]

All broken hearted,
there I sat upon the throne
passing only wind...​

 

[freedombecki]

bluebird keeps coming
back to wooden fence lookout
waiting for a snack​

 

[Delia]

The shakes are really bad
I am so tired of symptoms
I just want normal

 

[freedombecki]

The shakes are really bad
I am so tired of symptoms
I just want normal

please call your doctor
you need to modify meds
that one has to go
​

 

[freedombecki]

lakeside afternoon
green knolls abundant with grass
time to take a walk​

 

[Capstone]

The shakes are really bad
I am so tired of symptoms
I just want normal

please call your doctor
you need to modify meds
that one has to go
​

Where was your concern
for my constipation ode?
Do I count at all?!
​

 

[freedombecki]

quick-moving red birds
flitting on volunteer tree
scarlet tanagers
​

 

[freedombecki]

blooming blackberries
mockingbirds anticipate
mother nature's treat​

 

[freedombecki]

slowly mists gather
in the cool of dusky morn
prelude to sunrise​

 

[emilynghiem]

The perfect haiku

Or perfect enlightenment

Will never exist.

How do you know it
does not exist just because
you have not found it?