Haiku Moments

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    Flying high bird does go
    Low to ground hopper hops
    green grass
    grass so green
    bird hopper
    grass
    green
     
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    Bubbles in my beer

    Universal particles

    In my universe.
     
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    if you multiply
    zero times a billion it
    still equals zero.
     
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    philosophy is
    fundamentally about
    rationality.
     
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    Handyman project
    Mister boe in cranky mood
    Must escape til done
     
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    I hate Haiku

    Spank wife bent over

    Deep breath to absorb the sting

    Do it again please
     
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    Electrical Fracas!
    Professional help required!
    One Eight Five Dollars!
     
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    Rationality

    fundamentally is our

    true bubble popping.
     
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    Glorious cock rise

    It is a scorcher today

    Beautiful sunset.
     
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    Her pussy tastes like

    The first moments of my birth

    I like it down here.
     
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    I have had my fill

    A to be or not to be

    Then she looks at me.
     
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    where are we going
    that life passes too quickly
    we need to slow down.
     
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    Humble pie tastes like,

    The first day I went to school,

    I graduated.
     
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    why is there something
    and what does it mean to us
    that there is nothing.
     
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    Nothing is something

    From the first day we are born

    Something is nothing.
     
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    time passes quickly
    morning afternoon evening
    so enjoy the view.
     
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    Quickly I pass time

    Suffering time poisoning

    Time still suffer me?
     
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    oh lord how my shit stinks
    holy fuckin molly my shit stinks
    scientific fact
     
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    5

    7

    5.

    I am a traditionalist.

    But I will give you a 9.9 for Zen-like truth in subject matter written from an adapted thought.
     
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