My First Music Video - "Broken Smile"

[DarkFury]

The "down beat" clicking on this one was softer so the words were solid and clear.
I liked the lead in, in black and white because its a visual promotion of the evolution of the feeling.
From 1.53 to 2.16 I think the lighting should be brought up a little.

 

[MarathonMike]

Good first effort. I found myself waiting for a bridge or rhythm break.

 

[The Great Goose]

The guy in it has a great body.
He needs some sexy black girls dancing around him.

 

[S.J.]

I give it a 6.
It wasn't bad but it needed a twist, a bridge. I agree with Mike.

 

[Gracie]

The guy in it has a great body.
He needs some sexy black girls dancing around him.

lol. The guy in the vid is GT, goose.
And yes...he is ripped. I like the vamp teeth, lol.

Anyway...I liked it. Yeah it's your first but it won't be your last. Good finishing touch of you standing in the coffin then the dirt being tossed over it. Only problem I have with the whole thing is....the words Genius Tracks is not very readable. Other than that....you did good.

 

[Gracie]

I tweeted it, hon.

 

[aaronleland]

Pretty well done. Was the dude at the beginning getting on his knees to blow the other dude in makeup in the cave? He fell into the water like he drank some poisoned cum.

 

[The Great Goose]

The guy in it has a great body.
He needs some sexy black girls dancing around him.

Most of them have an eleven inch policy and Im a few shy, oh well.

You're well cute,yeah.

 

[Lewdog]

I have to say at some times your voice goes a little flat, you might need some more auto-tune in it, especially in the part where you are doing the close up of you singing into the mic with the fangs.

 

[WheelieAddict]

Not bad at all. I gave you some constructive criticism a while back on some tune I can't remember about poor song strong structure or some bullshit. This is much better. Of course I'm just some douche on the internet giving an opinion haha. Song is a bit short.

The video is very good for what resources I'm guessing you are working with. Pretty creative and fit with the song. Those outdoor scenes have me guessing Hudson valley or Catskills.

 

[WheelieAddict]

Not bad at all. I gave you some constructive criticism a while back on some tune I can't remember about poor song strong structure or some bullshit. This is much better. Of course I'm just some douche on the internet giving an opinion haha. Song is a bit short.

The video is very good for what resources I'm guessing you are working with. Those outdoor scenes have me guessing Hudson valley or Catskills.

Very close man! Holy crap....youre pretty good. lol.

It was filmed in Albia, Brunswick, Lansingburgh, Troy and Latham (NY)

Was it the leaves how you did it?

More the geology/rocks with the waterfall and pools I can tell it's downstate NY from the time I've spent there outdoors. I'm from upstate.

 

[WheelieAddict]

Not bad at all. I gave you some constructive criticism a while back on some tune I can't remember about poor song strong structure or some bullshit. This is much better. Of course I'm just some douche on the internet giving an opinion haha. Song is a bit short.

The video is very good for what resources I'm guessing you are working with. Those outdoor scenes have me guessing Hudson valley or Catskills.

Very close man! Holy crap....youre pretty good. lol.

It was filmed in Albia, Brunswick, Lansingburgh, Troy and Latham (NY)

Was it the leaves how you did it?

More the geology/rocks with the waterfall and pools I can tell it's downstate NY from the time I've spent there outdoors. I'm from upstate.

They call here "upstate" also - think its all in relation to that Monstrousity we call NYC.... Im 3hrs away from there. Your from Cuse?

Pretty close I grew up in the country outside the city. When people think NY they just think NYC, but the rest of the state is a really beautiful place, the summers are amazing.