"I'm Saved" SOng

[simo5656]

I really just want some input on a song I wrote. Please check it out and be honest!!!

Here it is:

[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r7baPcjtA14]I'm Saved - YouTube[/ame]

 

[Mr. H.]

simo got talent.

 

[simo5656]

I'm getting your rep power up!!!

 

[Mr. H.]

It's a little difficult to understand the lyrics. I assume this is a faith-based song?

 

[Book of Jeremiah]

You have a very nice voice. You need some voice lessons and should find someone to work with you. The music you wrote is lovely. I like it. The lyrics were difficult to understand - agree with Mr. H. on that one. Could you possibly post the lyrics so we can have a look at them?

 

[jon_berzerk]

take your time keep at it

could you post the lyrics by chance

 

[simo5656]

I appreciate all the comments very much. I will type up some lyrics to give you guys. To be honest my songwriting process is just hit record and capture what happens. I guess it can be interpreted as religious. I am religious. But I'll get a full set of lyrics for you.

 

[Book of Jeremiah]

The music you wrote is very good. I can imagine that being played on the radio. Why not? You have a very nice voice, fine tune, get some good coaching with your voice lessons ( all singers benefit from those ) and keep putting your music out there!

 

[simo5656]

Thanks Jerimiah. I will take your advice and I appreciate the encouragement. Means a lot.