"The Secret" - couldn't rep you, but I would have.....wait a minute, there's a joke in there somewhere. I was going to say that the film "The Sixth Sense" was a very cleverly written example of hiding in plain sight (oh sorry, bloody bad pun!) and that made it work. Good on you for putting your story out there. Again as they say, "One per cent inspiration, ninety-nine per cent perspiration". That's why they call it a craft I reckon.