My Poem Called: "Gangster"

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    Credit the gangster with one thing.

    Hes a purveyor of many coats. He watches on as the purposeful hands exchange their tonsils, one by one, in Tiananmen circles of cattle. The wind? It cringes. All incentives, now little more then jealous hounds, Stonehenge themselves to the melody of every opera of history.

    Now the last good farmer is in the corner, and hes arguing political gypsyism has taken over the country. But all methane jane dos aside, you really got to credit the gangster with one thing,

    Even if it pains your testimony or undercuts the many principaled spasms you objectively chronicled during your many travels through the Italian version of Kansas city.

    Yeah you really got to credit the gangster with one thing.

    He knows how to flatter a businessman
     
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    Here's my tribute to Obama and gangsta style govt:

    www.gangstastyle.org

    to the tune of "Gangnam Style"

    Under the Constitution I don't need to follow
    There's something called the Bill of Rights that I just rendered hollow
    I'll make you pay for health-care, till we all end up on welfare
    I have no - clue - and I don't care

    I'm a Socialist
    Instead of teaching equal independent business sense
    I'll take our greatest wealth and waste it till we're penniless
    While I retire at your expense, cuz that's what justice is
    To this Socialist

    Fourteenth Amend-ment
    Equal Protec-tions
    Aren't for rich folks NO
    (Don't need their votes) NO

    The NRA and
    Second Amend-ment
    Can kiss my throne
    Cuz I've got drones
    Chicago ethics are the only way to go go oh hell no

    Obama Gangsta Style
    Gangsta Style
    O O O God No Obama Gangsta Style
    Gangsta Style
    No No Just Say No
    No more Gangsta Style

    [right/left sides:] Hey, A-C-A sux/ROCKS!
    O O O O bama Gangsta Style
    [left/right sides:] Hey, N-R-A sux/ROCKS!
    No No Hell No (N-R-A Go A-way)

    Judges and Courts, should be equally defending
    The freedom of ALL people that our States are representing
    Consensus takes too long when half the Nation is dissenting
    So my own - laws - I'm inventing!

    I'm the President
    I'll issue orders without voting if you don't consent
    Silly checks and balances on power are a detriment
    Why keep a contract with the people and the government
    I can circumvent?

    The Sixth and Seventh
    And Tenth Amend-ment
    Aren't etched in stone
    When I've got drones!

    Fourteenth Amend-ment
    Equal Protec-tions
    Aren't for you folks
    Your law's a joke
    And-I-will laugh from my Hawaii Retirement Ho ho ho ho home

    Obama Gangsta Style
    Gangsta Style
    O O O hell No Obama Gangsta Style
    Gangsta Style
    No No Just say No
    No more Gangsta Style
     
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    Spending so much time focusing on what politician is both a tremendous misunderstanding of the government. In short, only a moron would focus on the issues facing the US and think its attributable to one leader, whether that person is Trump or Obama.
     
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    Hi Blake Allyn
    If you read the lyrics they cite and list various Constitutional rights in context. So this is meant to be educational about the Constitution IN GENERAL. I have written tons of other songs which incorporate Constitutional principles in the lyrics to promote the application to real exercise of these in action and context. So it is about the principles, not about the person as in a personal attack or target.

    Here are other examples in the series I plan to produce for public radio and educational outreach to fund reforms:

    www.whatdoesthelawsay.org

    www.houstonprogressive.org/legalization.html

    www.houstonprogressive.org/isocracy.html#C

    www.judgmentcall.org

    www.houstonprogressive.org/democalls.html

    See also www.houstonprogressive.net
    www.10million.us and www.10million.net
    www.houstonprogressive.org/GIG.html
     
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    Um this isn't educational it is idiotic brainwashing and indoctrination.

    The idea of this as an educational tool regarding the constitution is a cool idea. But it has been done a million times and in this case merely presents a one sided view of Obama that is both grounded in fantasy and out of ignorance.

    BTW, I am not an Obama supporter. But I also dont support people like you having any role in the education of anybody.

    The talent you have is there for sure. I see it. But you focus way, way way to much on partisan angles.

    A partisan, is by definition, a moron. Remember that.
     
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