Day of Terror poem.

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    This is a poem I wrote two years ago in sixth grade
    Day of Terror
    September 11 started all the same
    Sinister events would earn it’s fame
    3,000 innocent people suddenly killed
    Making field of horror forever tilled
    Sadness, anger both were felt
    Yet American courage did not melt
    It was a day of unthinkable terror, a day of never-ending stress
    Their punishment should be no less
    An evil plan by a sinister evil man
    Coalition forces go as fast as you can
    The anti-wars should hold their breath
    And try to understand all of the death
    To stop the horrific Iraqi regime
    Kuwaiti freedom it should redeem
    Flight 93 is not in vain
    For the heroes battled on in the plane
    When we saw the damage our hearts were locked
    By that time governmental guns were cocked
    They were days of terror, days of stress
    Their punishment will be no less
     
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    Good job, amish!
     
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    Great job Amish1!!:clap:
     
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    with a little guidance he could grow up to be jsut like us! no wait, maybe thats not such a good idea.
     
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    i dont know, wed have to see how much he can drink and how fast he can smoke a pack of cigarettes...lol
    BUT NO FOUL LANGUAGE DAMMIT...lol

    hell ya seem alright to me. can talk a storm anyway....:D
     
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    Thank you very much. It was alot better before my teacher suggested I change it. I modified it for the grade. I was invited to the finalists banquet twice in Orlando with that poem. It cost around 600 dollars, I couldn't go.
    Be sure to read my other poems: Antichrist and Sacred
     
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    That was excellent !! Keep it up !! :clap:
     
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    Europe is being overrun by the Muslims,
    Soon it too will become a land of slums.
    Dirty Beast
    From the Middle East.
    Europeans don't carry guns
    To stop the filthy Muslims.
    But America will answer the bell,
    And defeat those cowards going to hell.
    And remember Americans have guns
    To kill those filthy, beastly Muslims.
     
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