'worst then him'?
Just the sort of semi-literate hick that Trump appeals to....
Mousterian
at least Dalia speaks for herself and doesn't rely on paid speech writers
that allow Michelle Obama and Melania Trump to plagiarize other sources.
Maybe the working people can't afford the same help
Clinton and others use to "CYA".
At this point, I'd rather have transparency.
Dalia good for you.
If you want to improve your writing, I think it's worth it for
someone like you who has good things to say and contribute.
Your critic is right, that you would be taken more seriously
the better you present yourself. It's better to start with
gold and purify that to shine, than start with garbage
and try to polish that to push on people.
Go for it, but unlike the mistakes that Trump and Clinton both make:
listen to your critics for the purpose of self-improvement and growth.
it is a wise man who accepts rebuke, according to the Bible.