JoeMoma
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I stand by that last sentence. Pick a child to save and get the job done. If that troubles you, I'm sorry, but that's the best that can be done given the rules set up by the OP. In high stress situations, sometimes it's best to be calm and in control. Consider how the astronauts of Apolo 13 handled their crisis. Panic can result in disaster in an emergency. One can be emotional after the emergency is over.Perhaps! But if only one child can be saved then the last sentence is the optimum. Being emotional or grief stricken will no in any way improve the situation. I suspect that if I were involved in such a situation, I would need professional counseling because I would beat myself up for the child that did not survive even though I know that such grieving to be irrational.I do not accept PaintMyHouse as being an authority on being rational. Given the situation, it's not more rational to save either child rather than the other for there are many ways to rationalize the situation in the favor of either. Just pick one and get the job done.
I agree with the post above, overall. Your last sentence, however, made it considerably more difficult for me to do so, whereas minus that remark, I'd have had no cause to pause before thus concluding. The matter and choices aren't nearly as desultorily determined as that statement, which connotes a blase, perhaps even serendipitous, tone, implies.
I agree with you. It was solely the tone of that final sentence that troubled me.
Personally, I think the final sentence weaken the paragraph as a whole, that is, the paragraph was far more poignant without that final sentence in a "less is more" way.
That probably comes as a shock to some readers for I often write long posts that attempt to comprehensively express the overt and subtle elements of my ideas, but I do understand the "less is more" principle too. I just don't take it to the extent whereby I use it as a reason to be less than fully clear and expressive.