Saigon
Gold Member
Docmauser -
It looks like a sentence which needs major corrective surgery...amputate a few adjectives, and perhaps try and stitch on a verb or two.
A decent rule of thumb might be - if it doesn't make sense to you, it probably won't to anyone else either.
It looks like a sentence which needs major corrective surgery...amputate a few adjectives, and perhaps try and stitch on a verb or two.
A decent rule of thumb might be - if it doesn't make sense to you, it probably won't to anyone else either.