Tiny Story: The Shift Supervisor

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    The Shift Supervisor by RWA

    Shift supervisor at fast food restaurant shows up late hungover.

    High school nemesis, who has become health inspector, shows up to hassle him.

    He kills the health inspector. Hides the body. Raymond the slightly slow fast food employee helps.



    The shift supervisor learns to quit partying so hard and not kill as much.

    There will be a sequel to this; we know because even though the shift supervisor assumed the health inspector came to his establishment out of rotation, the restaurant really was next in rotation according the computerized schedule system, and the inspector never showed at the next restaurant on the list. It's not over.

    The end.
     
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