Tiny Story: Guided Tour Terrorism

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    Guided Tour Terrorism by RWA

    Terrorists take over some attraction with guided tours. Tour givers are terrorists. They take the whole site hostage. Father of a family saves the day.

    male assertiveness rediscovered and validated, as highlighted by dramatic detail not mentioned in this brief telling.

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    sounds formulaic...
     

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