Tiny Story: The Shift Supervisor II: Road To Ruin

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    The Shift Supervisor II: Road To Ruin

    In our last episode the shift supervisor has killed his high school nemesis, who had become a health inspector and was hassling our protagonist. He was assisted by Raymond the slightly slow fast food employee.

    The shift supervisor goes to jail for his murder because he left too many loose.

    While in jail he joins the Bubba gang and takes to gang banging some weird zebra boy named NYCFlasher for fun, and profit. How profit? They wager on who can shoot the most loads into Flasher.

    He finished his days in this manner. Though he becomes a lawyer from a correspondence course, he can never get out of prison.

    The end.
     
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    How does William Joyce get Flasher to join USMB?

    Is that for the next book?
     
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    How did you know the shift supervisor was William Joyce?

    You must have found the hidden clues, embedded in the intricate subplot!
     
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    I know this thread is a little dated, but Raymond is Bid D right?
     

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