Terry
Shut the $%$ Up!
- Jan 15, 2009
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I need honest feed back on this one.
Lake, deviously warm
Sun’s glare awakens,
croon of birds whisper
sharp, through shivering air
Lake, deviously warm
Sun’s glare awakens,
croon of birds whisper
sharp, through shivering air
All are calm, slowly
rebelling the nature of
ripple
rebelling the nature of
ripple
Their eyes locked
with Apollonian glare
Mine are cold, burn
with Apollonian glare
Mine are cold, burn
My inversion swallowed
The calm water speaks
The calm water speaks
Still blind to my presence
Ah, finally I see all are
much better with chaos
Blind to my fluttering kick
Above the chained ripple
much better with chaos
Blind to my fluttering kick
Above the chained ripple
Passing me by
I wonder how to be born
I wonder how to be born
They pass, still,
without any ripple
but mine
without any ripple
but mine
My eyes failing to drink
Thus breathing in the cold bubble
Thus breathing in the cold bubble
Will anyone ever
come more slowly?
A nudge will do
come more slowly?
A nudge will do
Great sensual taste
Salty becoming
death
Salty becoming
death
Why everyone flutters
just as I
My world of shame
for all to see
just as I
My world of shame
for all to see
Still no nudge
Still I flutter
for all to see
Still I flutter
for all to see
Feet dry, ears filled to the brim
Oh, death’s ditty
full of thumps and bubble
Oh, death’s ditty
full of thumps and bubble
Again blind, perfect under chaos
Many nudges my way
Many nudges my way
Many ripples too
A calm restores
Rock ties me to shore
Rock ties me to shore
The wolf nibbles
My mortal
a tasteless appetizer
My mortal
a tasteless appetizer