A poem

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    Why do you torment me so?
    Why do you show so me anger?
    What have I dun to enrage you?
    I love you, but you push me back.
    I still don't understand.
    All I have done is love you.
    But you don't love me.
    I know in heaven, you'll love me again.
    Until than, I love you, and I hope you love me again.
     
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    Dont worry about it. Shes just on the rag. Giver her a week!! :D
     
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    Actually, I just made that up from the top of my head. My girlfriend and I are happy together and we haven't had a fight yet...err...unfortuneatly, key-word Yet
     
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    Oh no? Thats good. How long you been dating? 3 days?? LOL

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    Leave it to Jackass!!!!! :)

    Don't mind him, he has serious PROBLEMS!!!! :p
     
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    i am sure she will be back ...

    even she pushed me back...

    her hart is not a black ...

    i am sure she will be back ...





    smooth poetry ... for soft girl ....


    good luck .....






     
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    Hey welcome Student ! :)
     
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    i am sure her eyes cry ...

    since she said for me good bye...

    we are two in hill of love ...

    but i am sure one should be die ....

    dont ask me how come or why !!!

    i am sure she will be back ....




    (( I miss u ...... )) but still strong ....




    Thank u Mr Eric !!

    i hope to teach me some thing ....

    bye...




     

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