Lyrics-A Place For Songwriters To Share Their Lyrics.

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  1. Stashman
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    I noticed we needed a lyric category. This is a great place for songwriters/lyricist to share their lyrics with the world. Before posting you should copyright anything you share. Better safe than sorry.

    Life Changes

    Walking In the sun with my head up high
    Taking my time to count the clouds in the sky.
    She spoke the words I had been longing to hear
    Filled my heart full of cheer.
    She said, "She'd love me till the end of time."
    The words began to dance around in my mind.
    I finally found someone that could make me smile
    So I'm walking in the sun mile after mile.

    Life changes I don't why
    Adding stars to the sky.
    Life changes you know it's true
    What'cha going to do?
    If it can change for me it can change for you.

    Walking in the rain with my head hung low
    My clothes are soaking wet and so is my soul.
    She spoke the words that I had dreaded to hear
    Can't get'em out of my ear.
    She said, "It's over our love was through"
    Those were the blackest words that I ever knew.
    She found someone that could make her smile
    So I'm walking in the rain mile after mile.

    Life Changes I don't know why
    Stealing stars from the sky.
    Life changes you know it's true
    What'cha going to do?
    If it can change for me it can change for you.

    Sometimes it happy,
    Sometimes it's sad,
    Sometimes it's good,
    Sometimes it's bad.
    Sometimes it's up,
    Sometimes it's down,
    Sometimes you float,
    Other times you drown.

    Life changes I don't know why
    As sure as stars in the sky.
    Life changes you know it's true
    What'cha going to do?
    If it can change for me it can change for you.

    Walking in the sun.
    Walking in the rain.​
     
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    Stash, Is your song to be palyed and express in a particular venue.. Blues, rock, country?
    Good job...

    Blues..
    a fellow song writer.......
     
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    I think your group has phenomenal talent. What I'm hearing is good and then some. :)
     
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    Stashman, I didn't know this thread was here. I'm working on something that's more like a lyric than it is poetry, but it doesn't have much of a rock star type theme, and it's a wip (work in progress). I think I'll go swipe it off the poetry forum and bring it over here to work on it from time to time. I've written music (lost most of it in the moves we've made, prolly.) but it's not always as rhythmical as your band's very good drummer. I don't know. It's not really a song yet. Maybe I should work on it some more.
     
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    Life Changes (Long Version)

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    Very very...

    Whoever is pulling the base has a long thumb... Really a thunder thumber. He needs to come up a bit imo and the drum a bit back.

    Great lyrics and a good voice...
     
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    Great lyrics guys! You've got the talent!
     
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    Down by the river.. I called your name..Down by the river.. darlin this aint no game

    Now I was thinkin ,,bout times been and gone...and I will tell you a story about a walk along

    down by the river I heard ya shout my name,,,Down by the river its a cryin shame

    Down by the river I crossed the line...Down by the river was your time for dyin

    so now good bye baby..it s not to hard to see..when I think about you..this is where

    you'll be...down by the river I sing my ol song ..down by the river you wont sing along

    down by the river...
     
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