Procrustes Stretched
"intuition and imagination and intelligence"
the peanut gallery is formingThe OP reads like a twelve year old libertarian wrote it, and the thread title is off base as well.
It's always good to start a critique with a good introduction. Let them know you're serious and thoughtful, right out of the gate. Maybe you should ask a twelve-year old for some tips on persuasive writing.
A good introduction is one that entertains and keeps a reader.... this has failed,
look around the trailer park dblack