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Generally, I'm a competent writer, but it recently occurred to me that I might not be using a particular, metaphoric device of simile correctly. For example, which is correct?

Its sound was that of an approaching train.

OR

Its sound was that of an approaching train's.

In other words: His wont was that of a beggar (or beggar's?). . . .

Thanks.
 
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top one.
 

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Without knowing the characters perception... Both could be correct. Is it one train? Or multiples? The quandary in this writing isn't one of grammar. Rather one of context
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Generally, I'm a competent writer, but it recently occurred to me that I might not be using a particular metaphoric device correctly. For example, which is correct?

It's sound was that of an approaching train.

OR

It's sound was that of an approaching train's.

In other words: His wont was that of a beggar (or beggar's?). . . .

Thanks.

I believe number one would be correct, but it should be its, not it's. It's is a contraction for "it is."
 

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Without knowing the characters perception... Both could be correct. Is it one train? Or multiples? The quandary in this writing isn't one of grammar. Rather one of context
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Are you talking about one train, or multiple trains. That should answer your question
 
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I believe number one would be correct, but it should be its, not it's. It's is a contraction for "it is."
Yeah, I already caught the it's thingy. LOL! I started to express it differently and forgot to remove the apostrophe.
 
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You don't need to establish possession of the sound twice, which is what you're doing in the second example. I don't know that it's incorrect to say it that way but it's definitely a little redundant.
 
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Was an actual train approaching, or just something that sounded like one?
 

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Generally, I'm a competent writer, but it recently occurred to me that I might not be using a particular, metaphoric device of simile correctly. For example, which is correct?

Its sound was that of an approaching train.

OR

Its sound was that of an approaching train's.

In other words: His wont was that of a beggar (or beggar's?). . . .

Thanks.
If you presented that to an English teacher, he or she would be hard-pressed to correct your use of either one. The train is singular with use of “an” and the noise is “owned” by the train so the possessive form works.
 
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Generally, I'm a competent writer, but it recently occurred to me that I might not be using a particular, metaphoric device of simile correctly. For example, which is correct?

Its sound was that of an approaching train.

OR

Its sound was that of an approaching train's.

In other words: His wont was that of a beggar (or beggar's?). . . .

Thanks.
1st one is fine.

Your 2nd option would require "an" to be omitted and the apostrophe to be removed out of train's to make that sentence correct.
 

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I've always used the top one, but recently wondered. Thanks.
No problemo. I used to be a very prolific writer but I have no interest in it now.
 

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Generally, I'm a competent writer, but it recently occurred to me that I might not be using a particular, metaphoric device of simile correctly. For example, which is correct?

Its sound was that of an approaching train.

OR

Its sound was that of an approaching train's.

In other words: His wont was that of a beggar (or beggar's?). . . .

Thanks.
Without knowing the characters perception... Both could be correct. Is it one train? Or multiples? The quandary in this writing isn't one of grammar. Rather one of context
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one train--not multiple ..I think he edited it
 

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Ringtone I don't see why you can't use either
its sound was that of an approaching train's [ sound ]
 
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Was an actual train approaching, or just something that sounded like one?
Ah! So that's the key? If like one, train's, if not, train?
 
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