The Traveller

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    THE TRAVELLER

    Into the tranquil darkness
    The Traveller falls
    He knows not what may lurk
    In this dungeons halls.
    But he transgresses with courage
    Further into the darkness
    Only to find that he has fallen deeper
    Into dark webs of thought
    The light which can still be remembered
    Now faded and dim
    His thoughts of hope become likened to the light
    And through the power of fright turn on him
    He now roams and wanders
    through the shadows eclipse
    Clueless to the creature lurking behind
    Plotting the traveller's sudden demise
     
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    thanks for the great poem, very descriptive of a traveller's tale!
     
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    looking forward to your next poem posting, PLYMCO_PILGRIM.

    keep the creative juices coming :clap2:
     
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    I wrote that during orientation at Umass Amherst :).


    I'll post another soon.
     

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