Stuff I Wrote Before The Apathy That Is G.W. Douche

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    A Prelude To Remembering Me

    Seeking answers for reasons why I still remain
    Searching for something to elevate the pain
    Chiseling away the lighter elements of my heart
    Till nothing is left but all its’ darkest parts

    Remember when I came to you already bought and saved
    “To live is Christ, to die is gain”
    But you eventually abandoned me just the same

    By failing me with something so important
    You only gave strength to my anger and discontent
    Once a friend of the Christian trade
    With knowledge of the inside, I will pull your spade

    Institutionalized faith
    Where lunatics find escape
    To be themselves; at the same time fake

    Racing each other to be Christs’ number one host
    Who’s more endowed with spiritual gifts from the Holy Ghost?
    Their insane behavior is biblically reinforced
    And they’re encouraged to sustain their beliefs of self worth
    In what normal, healthy people would call grandiose

    Where life made them feel like a zero
    Religion possessed the tools that would make them a hero
    To be held up high in their own minds as the best
    This is the result when too much nothingness manifests
    Creates a desperate need for an extreme opposite
    They can’t have an emotion with any balance
    A symptom of someone with a mental illness

    All love; No hate
    Use the spirit to paint the flesh fake
    And avoid carnal desires
    Be like a robot
    Automatic and hardwired

    All for others; Nothing of self
    Poorly interpreted and often abused doctrine of their decree
    So in all your attempts to live free
    Where does your human side retreat?
    The rules have been set up to guarantee your defeat
    Watch the convinced believer tell you of Armageddon
    The day of wrath for the unrepentant
    And salvation for the steadfast Christian

    How can their thirst for violence be quenched?
    When they’ve created an anti-Christ to be lynched
    Miracles and all; his likeness is that of their savior
    But they say he’s the devil
    Dressed as a saintly impersonator

    Jesus was accused of the same corruption
    Calling him a false prophet and Satans’ magician
    But while he discipled men to fish for souls
    So they could feed nations with the gospels
    You sit idol as if being alive is a holy enough mission
    Making a big production for all to witness
    Hating minorities with the holy bibles permission
    -A perfectly practiced display of your religion-
    But you’re the abomination of saint hood imitation
    You do nothing but boast about your righteousness
    And attack your brethren with accusations

    When religion is taken so literal and serious
    Black and white
    Do or die choices
    Though we know this our society and government
    Bends an ear to such unreasonable voices

    Now if there’s ever an Armageddon
    It’s gonna be when your influence on my world
    Has come to a complete end

    A mouth of war rhetoric
    Words of a righteous heretic
    Christs’ revolution lost in translation
    We need a modern day ‘reformation’
    A good base should never be allowed to turn poisonous from their corruption

    Their unquestioned superior knowledge of religion
    Has for too long sustained their capability to redefine portions of our reality
    By contorting the true meaning into a self serving fallacy

    Religious alienation is another form to exploit difference
    So expose them and their systems using the same book they manically reference.

    1-1-04


    THOSE WHO BATTLE ON THE FRONT LINES.........


    Those who battle on the front lines
    On either side you will surely find
    Soldiers sacrificing their lives
    For the likes of such kinds

    Generals who are far far away
    From the tank fire and bunker diving fray
    He busies himself directing the war campaign
    Devising and revising attack routes and plans
    Arrogantly barking out his commands
    In the name of the president
    And his administrative demands

    To the public relations committee
    Puppeting the networks media sources
    Filtering information for lucrative corporate endorsements
    He delivers to the taxpayers a complete discourse
    That would later change or be starkly denied
    Yet few people called them on their lies
    But more upsetting was that it appeared
    The even fewer people noticed or really cared

    They assured us that this war had honorable purpose
    That evidence gave reason to fear another 9-11 or something much worse
    So we must act with urgency
    Or face the wrath of Saddams' W.M.D.s'
    So seriously, we must do something quick
    A pre-emptive strike should do the trick

    They cropped us using the old bait and switch
    Implementing their familiar political tactics
    Saturating the headlines with aristocratic bullshit
    You've got all this proof so why can't you show me?
    Because when I watch you on T.V. all I'm seeing
    Is Rumsfeld taking things he said back
    And scratching his head wondering
    'Where dem W.M.D.s' at?'
    When he's the one who should know
    Or did he forget the weapons deal
    He made a couple of decades ago?

    Meanwhile homeland security rolls back our freedom
    Secretly investigating anti-war organizations
    Jailing anyone whose' passed through immigration
    And ruining careers and lives
    Of people who stood up to this administration
    When will history teach us the real lessons?
    That it is not anti-American to question
    Was it not rebellion and revolution?
    That found and built this our nation

    The concept of war is as rational as a childish reaction
    To a problem that could only be solved by real adults
    But somewhere in life, the 'hows' weren't taught
    Perhaps he was absent that day
    Fell asleep in class while the teacher wrote it in chalk
    Or maybe he simply forgot
    But it's not all his fault

    When society twists his perception and removes absolutes
    Is it so shocking that he's dazed and confused?
    Marijuana is deemed illegal under current legislation
    But we dispense pharmaceuticals if there's even the slightest deficit of attention
    Drugs equal money, whether illicit or prescription
    The school districts receive an increase of federal funds
    For having even one more handicapped student

    While it was our government that trained Bin Laden
    And the Al Qaeda in methods of terrorism
    We gave them millions of dollars
    And weapons to fight the communist Russians
    Only to use that knowledge years later against us

    So how can we make exceptions?
    That violence is acceptable depending on its intentions
    How does one discern the difference?

    'Hail To The Chief'
    Our great leader who basically said
    Fuck the Geneva Convention
    He believes in his worldly position
    Its gods divine will that he 'leadeth' our nation
    Into a war that he had convinced us
    Is for the freedom of our children
    And a more secured homeland protection

    "God Ble$$ America!"
    It would have been one thing if it were an act of retaliation
    But an unprovoked and illegal invasion
    Looks more like the works of Satan


    Especially when I heard about Halliburton
    Ripping off the masses
    Those who pay the majority of the taxes
    When it was the rich you gave the brake
    Putting the financial burden of your operation
    On the strained pockets of those less fortunate

    Guns, Gods and Governments
    The holy trinity of sovereignty and providence

    Neo-Christian conservatives verses the evil radical Muslim heathens
    The Muslim says one last prayer of absolution
    As he prepares for jihad, the suicide mission
    The American prays with his gun
    Taught during basic training that the trinity is ONE.

    So finally Saddams' been captured

    He'll be put on trial for crimes against humanity
    It's too bad there are no crimes written for complacency
    Saddam was your strongest ally in the Middle East during the 1980s'
    Even though our government knew of his atrocities
    These tragedies weren't enough to provoke us to remove Saddam and his bathes regime
    What did was oil, globalization and greed
    Basically, for Saddam, we no longer had a fiscal interest or need.

    12-19-03


    "I would not say that the future is necessarily less predictable than the past. I think the past was not predictable when it started." Donald Rumsfeld
     
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    You should post that on your MySpace after you get back from shopping at Hot Topic.
     
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    You don't even know me.

    Don't waste my time again fella.
     
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    Stop wasting mine.
     
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    :rofl: Oi
     
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    Don't give up your day job...:eusa_dance:
     
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    Whether you agree or not...it's very well written. Believe me, I'm surrounded by writers and know well enough that what I say, I say well.

    For all the crap I'm getting in the 3 minutes after I posted it, I'm curious as to what exactly bothered you about it?

    Also, you people get so proud and boastful but remind you, your on the internet. In real life, 90% wouldn't think of talking to anyone like that, much less me.

    At least pretend to have the class and decency your types claim to have.


    It's too bad your 'ambitious' president can't build a time machine while he plans on going to mars so you can go back where that dumb ass quote came from. How bout you go back to watching Gladiator.
     
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    Awww. did I urt your fweelings??
    You don't have a problem calling someone a douche...
    So why do I need to make nicie?
    Maybe you should stop pretending you're a great poet...
    And don't forget......don't give up your day job...:rolleyes:

    And judging from what you posted to me....I think you are the last person to be talking about class...
     
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    You must REALLY love your 'president'. For me to use the word douche instead of bush and you to get that offended makes me wonder who's fweelings are really hurt.
     
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