Song I wanted to Share

[Blake Allyn]

Just wanted to get some feedback for a song I wrote. Critics welcome. Looking to improve not garner praise!

Thanks to anyone who takes the time!

 

[MarathonMike]

On my piano, your song is in G major with a 1 4 5 chord progression G C D. I changed it to a 1 6 2 5 which is G E A D which seemed to give it a little more depth. The bridge seemed a bit odd to me. For the bridge I went to E B E B E B F D. See what you think.