Jim and Moi...

[Dan]

And everyone else, really...

I finished that story you guys helped me with, the one set in the Chelsea Hotel. Would you guys be interested in reading it at all? Or would anyone here be interested at all?

 

[janeeng]

I would be interested! either post or send to my email! I could use something to read!

 

[Dan]

OK, guys, here's the story. I actually like this story a lot which is rare for me. I think the end is a little rushed, because I had to turn it in with my final portfolio, so I didn't have enough time to expand it, I should do that. Once again, thanks to Jim and Moi for their help, Moi,as the only person here who's actually been there, if you happen to read it, could you tell me if my details were alright? There's not that many of them, but I'd like to make sure.

As always, if you liked it or hated it, please give me some comments.

 

[Moi]

I thought it was great!

 

[Dan]

I thought it was great!

Thanks! I know I didn't have all that many details, but was it alright as far as accuracy?