Iron Poet

A little more time I'll always find
to frag those beeyatches till I'm blind
cranking up the sub wrapped in sound
letting those bodies hit the ground...

growing
figment
dust
 
didn't I do that Syrenn? anyway here's a poem to you

Your tiny footsteps on the sands
On a remote and lonely shore

The waving of thine beautiful hands
That windswept raven hair you wore

The mingled look of love to see
When I returned to gaze on thee


Well its a start steve...:doubt:
You need to make the next three words to work of Theliq :)
 
didn't I do that Syrenn? anyway here's a poem to you

Your tiny footsteps on the sands
On a remote and lonely shore

The waving of thine beautiful hands
That windswept raven hair you wore

The mingled look of love to see
When I returned to gaze on thee


Well its a start steve...:doubt:
You need to make the next three words to work of Theliq :)


yes you did... i posted before your edit...:)

good job!
 
I thought I was going mad but all sorted,Syrenn,I love poetry,always instead of following with the 3 words all the time,can I just put my own poems on here?????just asking steven:cool:
didn't I do that Syrenn? anyway here's a poem to you

Your tiny footsteps on the sands
On a remote and lonely shore

The waving of thine beautiful hands
That windswept raven hair you wore

The mingled look of love to see
When I returned to gaze on thee


Well its a start steve...:doubt:
You need to make the next three words to work of Theliq :)


yes you did... i posted before your edit...:)

good job!
 
I thought I was going mad but all sorted,Syrenn,I love poetry,always instead of following with the 3 words all the time,can I just put my own poems on here?????just asking steven:cool:
didn't I do that Syrenn? anyway here's a poem to you

Your tiny footsteps on the sands
On a remote and lonely shore

The waving of thine beautiful hands
That windswept raven hair you wore

The mingled look of love to see
When I returned to gaze on thee


Well its a start steve...:doubt:


yes you did... i posted before your edit...:)

good job!


There is a poetry thread.... this is for a string of poems one following the next. If you don't mind please put stand alone poetry in the other thread please.

http://www.usmessageboard.com/writing/64331-poets-corner.html
 
growing
figment
dust


All hail the gangs all here,
a figment of a fearless peer.
Growing beside a new career,
so call me dust - I have no fear.​

super
abundant
foster
 
To foster friendship Ropey and I are,
Stopping the slegging thus so far,
Kept us not on super parr,
Abundant thought is not a scar,

growing
figment
dust


All hail the gangs all here,
a figment of a fearless peer.
Growing beside a new career,
so call me dust - I have no fear.​

super
abundant
foster
....LIVE,LIFE,LOVE
 
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live
life
love

there once was a woman who dwelt in a shoe
she loved all her children who lived life there too
they all played red rover
got stained in green clover
and with so much laundry she had much ado

lost
lonely
lugubrious
 
Some fly to other destinations...
spitting and fuming regurgitations...
fearful and shamed to the 'nth degree...
with minds so lonely--they do not see...
their lugubrious protestations.​

boulevard
symphony
arboreal
 
arboreal sunrise shows horizon's face
refracted on lake's surface as nature's lace
mockingbirds' songs swell in symphonic grace
where boulevard winds to sabbatical place

filial
disabuse
vague
 

Delicate lace clasped through vague memory,
Filial connections lined in streamed lucidity.
Bearded through mind, disabused and foretold,
Of path and treasure in neither silver or gold.

confusing
page
render
 
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two hundred channels of confusion
yet watching may render illusion
that all is well when it so is not
change the channel/page; all is forgot

chapter
cede
clarify
 
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Chapter turned--cede is tossed --clarification at a cost.​

Farmer
Purpose
Breeze
 
~stuff you could hear and may already have heard~

farmers fly from fiery bees
to what purpose circus fleas
trained to charm the wits to tease
tires will spin on slushy cheese
when a thaw becomes a freeze
when a gale becomes a breeze
when a polar bear agrees
when it's hot, cold weather, please

<giggle>

inhibit
analogy
listening
 
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Inspired Listening
Inhibits Condescension
Analogous Proofing​

silver
promise
rapport
 
~stuff you could hear and may already have heard~

farmers fly from fiery bees
to what purpose circus fleas
trained to charm the wits to tease
tires will spin on slushy cheese
when a thaw becomes a freeze
when a gale becomes a breeze
when a polar bear agrees
when it's hot, cold weather, please

<giggle>​


:lmao: :lmao:

When a gale becomes a breeze,
No more farts, if you please...

:rofl:
 
~stuff you could hear and may already have heard~

farmers fly from fiery bees
to what purpose circus fleas
trained to charm the wits to tease
tires will spin on slushy cheese
when a thaw becomes a freeze
when a gale becomes a breeze
when a polar bear agrees
when it's hot, cold weather, please

<giggle>​


:lmao: :lmao:

When a gale becomes a breeze,
No more farts, if you please...

:rofl:

Hey, gales have to shut up sometimes. You've seen 'em out there. :D

Or maybe I should just said "Oh."​
 
Inspired Listening
Inhibits Condescension
Analogous Proofing​

silver
promise
rapport
^^^NICE ONE^^^
o the silver-tongued promise is a curious sore
it is made by politicians just to gain rapport
if you think a dream-come-true can be voted in
you'll be paying through the nose for it like any sin

pa ta ta ta ta taaaaaaah pa ta ta ta ta taaaaaaah
po po po po po man, po po po po po man
sucka sucka sucka sucka sucker po po man
payup payup payup payup payup payup payup pay pay up

waltz
zumba
twist

 
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Geeez, just when I had my creative juices flowing.... :(
put your poem on a post-it before you come here
or you could lose the spirit of your message dear
bum bum bum bum bum bummmm; bum bum bum bum bum bumma
i know how to do it and i do it well
otherwise my poetry goes straight to welllllll
cheerup cheerup cheerup cheerup cheerup cheerup cheerup cheer up
:lol:


 

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