Iron Poet

[Ropey]

Hollow advice, distant sound
Filtered
Though a membrane
Of wooly embrace
​

sugar
blanket
snap

we blanket the sugared tune
of the word--though miles of
electrons snap our metaphors
in time....
​

prophetic
sophomore
climb

 

[syrenn]

Listen to the bleating
Pale
Sophomoric angst
Struggling
Blind they climb
Hepless
Prophetic the fall





​

new words

dozen
soft
sight

 

[freedombecki]

terrapin dozen
seen sunning on softest sands
elude inspections







hover, inhabit, approbation
​

 

[Ropey]

hovering demands
embrace patterns of design
with approbations​

No new words?

Sorry, I thought I was in the Haiku section.

content
remedy
align

 

[Iridescence]

No new words?

 

[syrenn]

No new words?

Read the OP for the rules of the game.

 

[syrenn]

glowing
silver
mime

Oh, do you mean to use your three words in a poem?

Nice if so.

no YOU have to write a new poem with the words i gave you at the bottom

new words
flowing
blue
time

Time

You are timeless

nothing more than

flowing clouds

in an endless blue sky.


New words:

Guru

Yoga

Tantric

Well ya use the words from the last poem posted.... but.

Shakati my love
Tantric vision
Follow
The Guru of the mind
Cleave to me
Yoga

​

New words


Bell
sand
cover

 

[Sky Dancer]

I don't get it.

 

[syrenn]

Pey
Pey
Phat

Exhale

Gone

Sky... you have to use the words given in the last post to make the new poem. Thoes are the rules of iron poet.

The current new words are:





New words
Bell
sand
cover

 

[Ropey]

Shakati my love
Tantric vision
Follow
The Guru of the mind
Cleave to me
Yoga

​

New words

Bell
sand
cover

The toll of the bell strikes a band...
you see it's not a dream.
The beat of tide 'gainst the sand...
covers a hollow scream.
​

Ready
Freddy
Harumph

 

[syrenn]

Ready the voice
A booming harrumph
Tell Betty
Call Freddy
Ready the voice
All clear, all gruff
​

New words


apple
pillow
paw

 

[Ropey]

Ready the voice
A booming harrumph
Tell Betty
Call Freddy
Ready the voice
All clear, all gruff
​

New words

apple
pillow
paw

I was trying to make it hard. So much for my trying.

My footed pajamas padded after her
pillow-less on a cold tiled floor
a window fogged with condensation--
toddler eats applesauce.
silence returns....​

That took some work.

wishing
hoping
dreaming

 

[syrenn]

Dreams of wishing, solitude
Pray
Wishing for Dreams to come
Hoping
Nightmares unending
Blissful emptiness
The mind wanders
Stills
Wishing​

you dont know me very well, hard....lol.




new words


garnet
void
fire

 

[Ropey]

Dreams of wishing, solitude
Pray
Wishing for Dreams to come
Hoping
Nightmares unending
Blissful emptiness
The mind wanders
Stills
Wishing​

you dont know me very well, hard....lol.

new words


garnet
void
fire

Both light and darkness spring from garnet
riven of ruby, devoid of partners.
Such desire yields a fire of hope
with some loss and yes some pain.
​

I'm starting to get your writing though.


spring
diadem
breath

 

[Sky Dancer]

Spring

gone

Diadem of blooms

Fading

Falling leaves

on

the

breath

of

God​

New words

Heartless

Inane

Breathtaking

 

[syrenn]

Inane ramblings, Desperate murmurs
Fall silent
Within the empty Void
Heartless attempts of courage
Grapple with Desire
Breathtaking in the Dawn













​

new words
bread
ocean
song

 

[zzzz]

‘Tis everyday,
nay every minute,
your song sings,
to mine soul.

Providing substance,
bread for my hunger,
for your companionship.

Your eyes are as blue,
yes, as deep as the ocean,
drowning my heart
and my soul within.

I am hopelessly lost!



Rapid
Rain
Raging

 

[Sky Dancer]

Raging

Fire

of

Hatred

Extinguised

By

The

Rapid

Rain

Of

Loving-kindness.














New words

Fog

Explosion

Depth

 

[Ropey]

Raging

Fire of Hatred Extinguished By The Rapid Rain Of Loving-kindness.

^ Very nice metaphor Sky.

New words

Fog
Explosion
Depth

How can one steer the fog of choice,
if the explosion of life is a demand?
When can one truly hear the voice,
and grasp the call in depth of hand?​

New Words:

One
Returns
Love

 

[zzzz]

One
Returns
Love

Oh how I dream,
dream of the one,
one who is so beautiful,
beautiful as a true love,
love which she returns,
returns twofold to me.​

eyes
lips
legs