Iron Poet

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    It would seem as if there are a few poets out there....

    This is a little thread called Iron Poet... The poetry must be original and yours.

    You play by using the three words given at the bottom of the post, provided by the poster before you, in a new poem that you write. A duel shall we say of words.

    You may use a variation of a word. For example. Flip, flipping ,flipped.






    Sorrow for the Lost
    Broken Souls
    Dreams in Time, Surrender
    Space moves
    It Comes.






    new words
    flowing
    blue
    time
     
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    glowing
    silver
    mime

    Oh, do you mean to use your three words in a poem?

    Nice if so.

    I'll add D'oh...
     
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    no YOU have to write a new poem with the words i gave you at the bottom

    new words
    flowing
    blue
    time

     
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    The warm blue mien enfolds a dream,
    flowing through a green-blue stream,
    Still quiet enough to slow the time,
    and so allows me a nice quiet dine...
    Live
    Love
    Leave
     
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    Dont forget to leave three new words for the next poem.
     
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    Under the moon light
    Shadows live
    Leaving, but not
    Loving the Sun









    new words
    grapes
    road
    soft
     
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    He trod upon the grapes of wrath,
    This foolish bird on the wrong path.
    Now riding the soft shoulder of the road,
    Shallow of mind; noneffective and cold.​

    Eternity
    Clock
    Advice
     
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    Can you hear time, gentle pressure
    Fathomless motion
    Silent the Clock
    Listen to Eternity Cosmic Advice
    Where the Universe
    Breathes









    new words
    frost
    sheen
    pen
     
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    ^ Very nice. :razz:

    When the sheen of frost limes the tenement wall,
    then shrouds of sparkles gently pen their fall.
    Sweet
    Night
    Different
     
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    Different Dreams
    Sweetness in the Gloaming
    Trembling, Shimmering
    Gentle comes the Night





    new words
    steel
    borrow
    froth
     

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