Going to make a song, today. Work with me ->

G.T.

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On the concept.

What would you like to hear a song about. (no politics).

We can hash this out right here, I'm open for some input on this one. It may be a fun new experiment. Let's get some ideas. I'll take the one I feel I can get the best end-product on.
 
lack of input, a porn-star's worst night-mare.
 
I'm about to pass out but the Knicks and the Celtics are about to meet in a playoff series.
 
how about a beautiful wreck" lol..someone that can`t win for nothing!

"ain`t no wonder I`m a beautiful wreck" woo-hoo!
 
Lane,

Your idea is being worked on and will be posted by day's end.

Beautiful Mess, is going to be the actual title.
 
Gots my dick caught in my zipper and I'ze donts know what ta dooooo.
It hurts like a mother and I hope it happens ta yooooo.
Continue.

Maybe it would be good for a short poem, not a song though. :eusa_shhh:
 
Lane,

Your idea is being worked on and will be posted by day's end.

Beautiful Mess, is going to be the actual title.
Erica Jayne already has done Pretty Mess. Great song.

[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4qN3Ry2bMg0]YouTube - Erika Jayne - Pretty Mess[/ame]
 
Lane,

Your idea is being worked on and will be posted by day's end.

Beautiful Mess, is going to be the actual title.
Erica Jayne already has done Pretty Mess. Great song.

[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4qN3Ry2bMg0]YouTube - Erika Jayne - Pretty Mess[/ame]

Mine's fitting to be a classic. It will be done, soon. *working on it*
 
Lyrics so far:

I live in crooked ways
I look away because I look ashamed
I'm lookin' high up for some guidance,
But I've looked for days

I'm lookin out for people
People never looked for me
Obsessed with how I look
so maybe get mistook for gay

I'm bi-polar so,
I coulda took a different way
I'm not Religious but,
I sit and pray, to lift away

My mind is winter, mid December
But I wish for May
Days when I'm young just
Pissed away, I didn't play

I didn't say but
My eyes said I could get away
I'm reminded of....
Yesterday, if weather's gray

I'm on your speakers speakin,'
easin' off anxiety
I try to be the guy
that's really reachin' my society

I don't get it,
always echo what I've let go
but if I stress it,
will I ever be my best, no.

No I can't so,
the bandage only grabs hold
for so long,
then it's bleedin on a damn poem....




(I'm a Beautiful mess and I Own it, (own it)
Even not keepin' with the God Damned Joneses
I'm a magnifi-scent, little Dirt pile,
N' I don't give a shit, if I'm pissin' on yer style)
X2
 
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Hello all...I'm new here and I certainly don't want to make enemies right away, but you owe me two minutes of my life back...that song was a complete mess.

Utterly and completely talentless. Of course, I meant the video with the bimbo.
 
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