Erotic Poetry

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    Sex in Dress Clothes

    leave them on—
    struggling strappy shoes
    lustfully buckled blush

    dividing passion sheathed by
    button-down Armani blackness
    to be undone slowly
    with the option to rip

    black dress hung sterile
    sits crumpled and alive
    swept this way and that
    by an occasional flexed toe or heel

    crafty heady cadence
    a study of moist shadow
    subtlety becoming obscenity
    à deux becoming voyeur



    Oral Sex

    The young delegate
    philanderer, orator,
    sweats,
    pulls at his collar.

    Ironic, indeed,
    that he has no words.
    Fingernails across
    leather arm rests.

    Mouth open,
    eyes closed:
    politician is
    speechless.



    Air

    Air-conditioned car jam-packed is where (I
    B'ing it up the West Side to the South (Bronx
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    Interesting...
     
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    Did you write that? Just curious.
     
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    Yep.
     
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    Wishing my husband was home... :kiss2:
     
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    Have you submitted it elsewhere? It's pretty good, that's why I asked.
     
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    Haha nah, but I'm looking into it. Thanks Said!
     
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    Does anyone else think it seemed a little faggy? JUST KIDDING. (sort of.)

    I'm supportive of all creative efforts. So, good job!
     
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    You have a sexy way of thinking Ross ;)
     

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