Beloved Holly's Wood

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    does she know I touch you carefully
    does she know I love you genuinely
    could you tell her I know?
    could you reveal to her what I show?
    does she know I listen to you
    does she know I hear the true you
    could you tell her I know?
    could you reveal to her what I show?
    does she know I'm happy with it all
    does she know to complete you is our call
    could you tell her I know?
    could you reveal to her what I show?
    does she know she is as much a part of me
    does she know I love her through what you see
    could you tell her I know?
    could you reveal to her what I show?
     
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    Beautifully written, It speaks to the authentic self.
     
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    Thank you :) I don't normally share. *he*arts*
     

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