A Fourth Novel About the California Missions

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    Chapter Eleven – The Missions Wither, 1820 Revolutions everywhere, a quest for freedom started by the Americans, is now online @ https://msgdaleday.blogspot.com
     
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    The Missions Wither – Chapter Twelve not available @ https://msgdaleday.blogspot.com. Early 1821 – Dark News From Mexico about the unrest and possible revolution.
     
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    The Missions Wither – Chapter Thirteen – Early 1822 – A New Year – A New Ruler. Word reaches California about the end of Spanish Rule in Mexico and the establishment of the Empire of Mexico and the Three Guarantees is now available @ Father Serra's Legacy
     
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    Chapter Fourteen – The Missions Wither - End of 1822 – Major Changes Coming. The Family improves their haven while dark news comes from Mexico. Post available @ Father Serra's Legacy
     
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    /---- I stopped reading after the third paragraph. Nothing compelling with too much tell and not enough show. Sorry.
     
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    Chapter Fifteen – The Missions Wither – 1823 – Mexican California No real changes in the territory far from Mexico City but fears of what may come. Now available at https://msgdaleday.blogspot.com
     
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    Chapter Sixteen – The Missions Wither. 1824 – The Indians at Misión Santa Inés Rebel because of cruelty from soldiers against the wishes of the friars and without permission from the governor. A new Mexican governor arrives in the Territory of California. Now available online @ https://msgdaleday.blogspot.com
     
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    Chapter Twenty – The Missions Wither. 1827 – Big Social Doings in Monte Rey. At last, the new Mexican territorial governor deigns to travel from San Diego, where he prefers the weather and the daughter of one of the local families, to Monte Rey to attend the first territorial assembly. He's vain and not very impressive, constantly scribbling notes on little cards. Now online @ https://msgdaleday.blogspot.com. Enjoy
     
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    Chapter Twenty-One, The Missions Wither – 1828 – Calls for secularization – taking the missions away from the friars and turning them over to the Indians. This was the time of the first meeting of the territorial diputación or assembly with the governor actually traveling to Monte Rey. Now available @ http://msgdaleday.blogspot.com
     

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