YouTube - Original Song "Sunrise"

I am a 19 year old college student and I made this film music video using my own composition and lyrics. My 10 year old sister and I are the performers / actors. I envisioned this production as a reflection of the times we are living in.

I would appreciate any feedback.

Please also vote for my music video at:

Original Music Video "Sunrise" | Cinemocracy

Thanks!

Not bad.

Need to work on your sound mixing, a bit, I think.

I gave you a vote here: Original Music Video "Sunrise" | Cinemocracy