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Old 05-03-2006, 06:46 PM
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Originally Posted by onthefence
Only if I can cut elsewhere. I'm limited to 2,000 words. I thought the vague reference to Milton's stand against censorship was enough. Looking back, there needs to be more detail. I'll have to edit in order to get it in.
Ah okay. I thought your reference was spot on, just at the right point in the essay too because as I was reading it my mind was drawn to Milton and then there was your reference. With your word limit, yes, you can't really use an extract I suppose (especially since I think there are no short, snappy ones in Areopagitica). A brief summary of his main argument perhaps?
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